Christmas Day
Christmas Day, on December 25 which is one of the most festive Christian holidays in many countries around the world and earn it celebrates Jesus' birth, who Christians believe is the son of God.
The celebration of the Christmas starts in the Christians about four weeks before the Christmas and ends on the 12th day of the Christmas. During that day, the activity that Christians have to do, such as decorating a Christmas tree and meeting for giving gifts.
The decorating a Christmas tree,people enjoy decorating their houses with the Christmas tree in the centre of the house. They load the Christmas tree with lots of gift items such as chocolates, candies, balloons, dolls, birds, flowers, lights to make it bright and beautiful.
The meeting, people enjoy a big dinner party called feast. They prepare lots of delicious dishes, such as sweets, fruits, nuts on the dining table. Everyone wear colourful dress, dance, sing, party and enjoy doing other adventurous activities. Everyone wishes each other by the quote of “Merry Christmas” and go to another’s house to exchange wishes and gifts.
Christmas is a religious and cultural Christian festival celebrated annually to commemorate the birthday of Jesus Christ.
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