My experience
Who was/were involved in the story?
My friend and I were involved in the story.
What happened?
My friend and I went to tutor Brand's summer camp.
When did the story happen?
On 21-27 October, 2014.
Where did the story happen?
At Kasetsart university.
How did it happen?
-I went to tutor Brand's summer camp at Kasetsart university with my friends in order to prepare for university entrance exams.
-I studied with Kru.Lily.
How did the story end?
I would like to thank all the teachers and the brand team for their knowledge, it made me want to study this here.
On October 21-27,2014. I went to tutor Brand's summer camp at Kasetsart university with my friends in order to prepare for university entrance exams. I was so excited because this is the first time that I learned about life in the university.The first day I walked into the university. I was so excited, this the university is very large and this the first time to come studied with Kru.Lily.She is a good teacher and teaching fun. Finally, I would like to thank all the teachers and the brand team for their knowledge, it made me want to study this here.
Your content is very short and you don't have an introduction and conclusion. The score is 7 points.
ตอบลบThis passage is pretty short. I think you should add more information. Keep fighting!
ตอบลบ8 points
Wow! You'd been there before! Anyway, this story is so great and I'll give you 8.5 points.
ตอบลบIt's still too short and lack of introduction and conclusion.I can give you my 8.5 points.
ตอบลบYou should add more information to make me know more than this. I give you 8.5 points.
ตอบลบ